Persuasive Writing- Opposing to School Uniforms

Joey, Kim
08-06-2013

Dear Principal Kim of Seaview Highschool

I am writing this letter because I stongly believe that students shouldn't wear school uniforms. An expert, John Grossman, eHow Contributor agree to me.
I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.

The first reason is that school uniforms affect students' lack of expression. If everyone wear the same clothes it gives bad image and decrease students' creativity.

The second reason is that school uniforms are uncomfortable. Plus, school uniforms make students extremely hot at summer times and cold at winter times.

It is also known that Children who wear school uniforms are more likely to use makeup early, and many resort to extreme accessories or to alter their uniforms to differentiate themselves from others. For example, many girls shorten their skirts as a way to rebel against the severity of school uniforms.(source:http://www.wisegeek.org/what-are-the-pros-and-cons-of-school-uniforms.htm)

The final reason is that school uniforms are too expensive. In Korea, if you first enter a school(mostly middle and high school) the price's of the uniforms are about four hundred thousand won.




Most school students do not agree about wearing school uniforms, too.

In conclusion, I do not want Seaview High School students wear school uniforms.







Sources

http://www.ehow.com/info_8043408_expert-negative-effects-school-uniforms.html
http://www.questgarden.com/22/09/7/060424221257/images/jeff051000.gif